Wednesday, November 21, 2007

Who is Who?

Twinkling bright it says
I shine apart, not in a quest to
it is how I survive
brightest when the world sleeps
preparing in the king's presence

A distance apart we are
still you could see me
for the inspiration you are lit with
you could only have had it after seeing me

It smiled, not in sarcasm
to appreciate makes one happy
to encourage and pat for persistence
may kindle something more

Through a window it happened
we both being on each side
it may not be difficult for you to make
who said which of these lines

Doesn't really matter
we both shine equally bright
nature was enthusiastic
to fuel us for eternity

-G Singh, Philadelphia, 22nd Nov 2007

3 comments:

aman said...

refreshing to hear you after such a long time..keep writing.. :-)

Wanderer said...

is this a conversation between the self and the conscience, and the dilemma between who's who? it is indeed bright, deep and beautiful... and i hope it is what my rusted brain thinks it to be...

Gurpreet said...

nice to read a post on ur blog aftr such a long time... but, finding it hard to decipher who is who...